Six sentence story

This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about creating a character and adding detail.Our focus was on creating sentences.We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence are,,that  a sentence must make sense and your sentence has to have a one idea,and the  third one is sentence has to have a space (  ) next to each word and last but not least the fourth one is that you have to have a capital letter at the start of your sentence and a full stop at the end.I kind of found this easy i guess,but choosing my character was a bit challenging for me.comment if you want to give me some feed backs on my writing.

Kindness

Today we have been learning about kindness.And we are writing a poem about kindness we also had to put in ten things about kindness in the poem.We also had to brainstorm about our ideas we had.We also had to get into three or four groups.It was also fun and it was not really that hard.

Lipogram

The two boys had a battle around the world for a flamy dragon.

Today in writing we used a picture prompt to create a lipogram.A lipogram is a sentence without using one particular letter.We had to write one interesting  sentence describing the  picture without using the letter 'i'.I found this challenging because I use the letter 'i' a lot so that's what I found challenging.

hockey

Today we had Peter from Canterbury hockey visit us. In hockey we were learning about dodging other people. First we did dribbling. We had to imagine the ball is stuck to the stick with double-sided-tape. After that we learnt how to stop and dodge other players. We had to control the ball at all times. Lastly we played a game like "Rob The Nest'. We had to get the ball from the middle until all the balls are gone. After all the balls are all gone in the middle we had to rob other peoples nest. I found turning the ball a bit hard because the ball kept running away. I found holding the stick easy. I learnt how to turn the ball today in hockey.

Here is a picture of Mrs Mcguinniety's home room.

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