Friday, March 22, 2019
Six sentence story
This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about creating a character and adding detail.Our focus was on creating sentences.We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence are,,that a sentence must make sense and your sentence has to have a one idea,and the third one is sentence has to have a space ( ) next to each word and last but not least the fourth one is that you have to have a capital letter at the start of your sentence and a full stop at the end.I kind of found this easy i guess,but choosing my character was a bit challenging for me.comment if you want to give me some feed backs on my writing.
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great work yeet
ReplyDeleteGreat work i like that you used the name Captain Marvel
ReplyDeletegreat work i like youre Captian Marvel
ReplyDeleteHi Kristhel,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you put in a superhero. Captain marvel sounds like a pretty cool name. I like how you also put remembered instead of found. maybe you can put in chairs instead of seat because chairs will sound more descriptive. what happens after she found her shield.
Hi Kristhel Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. I agree with Aone I want to know what happens after she found her sheild! This is a very well structured story well done! What sort of roof can she break?
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to hearing back from you.
Miss Goslin
Hi Miss Goslin ,
ReplyDeletethank you for commenting on my blog and the roofs she can break are.... House roofs, Restaurant roofs and more other roofs. Also when she found her shield she went to the End Game battle.